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SubjectRe: [PATCH v10 0/6] Raspberry Pi Sense HAT driver
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On 06/09/2022 04:21, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:
> On Tue, Aug 23, 2022 at 01:41:53PM -0400, Charles Mirabile wrote:
>> This patch series adds a set of drivers for operating the Sense HAT
>> peripheral device. This board is an add on for the Raspberry Pi that is
>> designed to connect using the GPIO connector and communicate via I2C.
>>
>
> Better say "Add a set of drivers for Sense HAT peripheral add-on device
> for Raspberry Pi. The device is connected using GPIO connector and
> communicate via I2C".
>

The cover letter won't be part of the git log, so as long as it's understandable
it's OK. It makes no sense to review the wording...

Regards,
Matthias

>> This is a refactor of the work of Serge Schneider, the author of a
>> version of this driver that is currently in the Raspberry Pi downstream
>> kernel. We modified his code to make it suitable for upstream Linux.
>>
>
> s/We modified his code/The driver code is modified/
>
> Also, I see that description of individual patches is written in
> descriptive mood. However, it is preferable to write in imperative
> instead (see "Describe your changes" in
> Documentation/process/submitting-patches.rst). The specific suggested
> wordings are in reply to each patch.
>
> Thanks.
>

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